Good start, I like the video there is a good use of images, music and video. YOu have used transitions, composited images and uploaded it to your blog, well done. There is a good clear structure and it is well paced.
To improve it further I would eliminate some of the transitions as they are a little distracting in parts. I would also re shoot some of your video footage so that there is a range of shots that you could put together at the most shots are shot in the wide, rather than shooting a sequence which could be a close up, mid shot and a wide shot for example.
Good start, I like the video there is a good use of images, music and video. YOu have used transitions, composited images and uploaded it to your blog, well done. There is a good clear structure and it is well paced.
ReplyDeleteTo improve it further I would eliminate some of the transitions as they are a little distracting in parts. I would also re shoot some of your video footage so that there is a range of shots that you could put together at the most shots are shot in the wide, rather than shooting a sequence which could be a close up, mid shot and a wide shot for example.